I woke up, my eyes beginning to adjust to the plain
darkness. I stood up, my veins pulsing loudly and blood boiling. I could feel
the cold, somewhat queer stone on my feet; the odd, deafening silence and the
agony that I felt in my left knee.
“I have to get out... right now” I told
myself, taking a couple shaky, fragile steps into the darkness. I could feel my
knees buckling. “Lisa will be so
worried if I don’t return home in time...”
And I instantly remembered my beautiful,
14-year-old old sister, Lisa. Oh, how beautiful and ethereal she was, how
dainty and graceful – so full of motion and happiness. Oh, she’s the only thing
I’ve got. “I have to return home...”
Suddenly, a gust of icy wind blew in my face,
and I felt myself startle.
Instantly, a candle was
lit, and I saw a broken, mahogany stool on which the candle stood. The golden,
beckoning flames seemed to dance around me as though I was lost in furious,
fire. But all I could do was take it and keep going, for it seemed like the
only bit of light that was left in this dark place.
Now I could see that it
was a kind-of cave; the grey stone-walls, the hard rock ground, water dripping
from somewhere above - most likely the unfathomable, high ceiling.
Then I heard it; a gasp, a moan. A shudder, a
flick. A breath, a heart-beat. Then a smoky-white, ghostly figure shot right at
me!
As it came closer, closer, the thin hand
reached out for my heart. As it’s cold, dreadful fingers seemed to close around
my soul, close around my heart, I felt myself catching my breath and falling to
the floor, with a particularly-vibrant crash. I tried gulping for air, but it
seemed like the spirit seemed to create a choking, little box around me, so
that light nor oxygen could pass right through it.
With a start, I felt my
heartbeat slowing to a minimum, my lungs aching and squeezing really hard
inside, my skin becoming pale and cold. So pale, that it seemed to gleam for
seconds. I felt so out-of-control, so wild, as though something has just gone
terribly wrong with my brain, and I have turned from a normal, healthy boy, to
a mad zombie…
I looked around
frantically, and suddenly I could see a silvery, maddened shape. Looking at the
thing’s face made my head loll to one side, my eyes half-open. With my
perhaps-last breaths, I held the gaze with the it. Before I cold do anything else, the translucent eyes-holes sank
into me like knife-edged disks, and I closed my eyes.
Hours, or maybe days later, I woke up,
realizing that I could breathe normally again. Looking around, I suddenly saw
someone gazing tenderly at me; the light-blue eyes stared at me with love, and
the soft lips were suddenly shaped into a smile. “Max... I love you.” and that was Lisa.
Can you please upload the ghost story you won in that compotition.
ReplyDelete@Dimitri Liarakos, of course I'll do that. Thanks for taking your time and going on to CreativeCrystal! I really appreciate it!
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